What Is The Correct Thing To Write In A Wedding Card Can You Please Help Me With My Poem? Construictive Critics Please. Very Urgent.?

Can you please help me with my poem? construictive critics please. very urgent.? - what is the correct thing to write in a wedding card

Soft hands, raises his arm
Crumpled paper, published a list of
You need to look this evening at the house today
Four things to find, store,

An oak Dollhouse
A pipe used to smoke as
The ax, nor with red skin, stained
A wedding ring, his mark

"Unmatched by any other crimes,
For the life that was once my "
He banged his fists on a wall,
Heart in his boots, began to crawl

She could not continue as usual
The summer is over, the weather turned sour
It seems some can not from the cold
They do not know what to put here.

I have a few lines to tell the story
and then ends with
He sat on the stairs, his mistress
He cradles a teddy bear, blond hair
Her little voice whispers softly
"Hi, Dad, do you think of me?


Please note that I can not just have 13 and the MSIS-one years of my studies so my grammar is correct. I just havnt had anything good to write for a longTime.